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Very good book, I like the Ortus system, writing quality Is top notch, MC isnt a beta but also dosent think with his dick. .........................................
Yaaaaaaaa iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis goooooooood nooooooooveeeeeeeel faaaaaaanfiiiiiiiiiiiic hs dxd i hope always update to end πππππππππππ
I thank the lord author is back updating the story. The story is just great and I love it. Hate Rias because sheβs just so stubborn and ignorant. Iβm glad the FL is someone else. Anyways, overall is great and I look forward to more is all I can say.
THE MORE I READ OF THIS STORY THE MORE I LIKE IT πππππππππππππππ€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©πππππππππππππππππβββββ
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if you stay consistent with the novel update sooner or later it will continue to rise in rank, keep up the spirit, friends, there are still many people waiting for the novel update faster, thank you
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I enjoyed your other fanfic and this one as well. I'll give you a five. Look forward to more if you works Jan-ne.
Nice work well done keep it this way cooΔΊllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllΔΊlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
The author name make me afraid of giving a bad review so here you go......... That's aside, I like this novel more than the author other work, Sona as the main heroine is nice, personally I don't mine him being servant as long as he has the gut to stand up for himself instead of getting push around like some of those irritating protagonist out there( the MC is only servant for the first few chapters though). Hopefully MC don't end up in a relationship with Rias, not that I really hate her but yeah, hope they stay just as friend or something.
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This **** is crazy! Its completely next level. I really loved the spongebob arc. Thanos got absolutely annihilated by spongebob. MC was so pathetic when fighting Thanos yet spongebob completely desteoyed him. Although its kinda disappointing that the MC loves that trap.
This is good. Keep it up......more chapter......;m;mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm;mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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I like that the main heroine is Sona ,I was getting tired of Rias being the bitchy heroine. It would be great if he creates a public organization like a guild. It would be great if he doesn't control the chaos brigade so there will be some plots left for the "Oppai Dragon" so reconsider my review. I also like his trials. WILL RATE FIVE πSTARS TO SUPPORT AUTHOR , RATE HIM FIVE STARS OR VOTE HIM TO KEEP THIS GOING, I DON'T WANT THIS NOVEL TO BE DROPPEDπ₯πππππ₯π₯ [THIS IS A MASTERPIECE]. ππ+π=πͺ
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I enjoy how different it is from other DxD fanfics and how the main difference is that Trials has Sona as the main heroine in this harem fanfic instead of the usual Rias making it refreshing. I like the character designs but I kinda wish there was a description of the main character as I try to imagine the scene and the characters of the fanfic and novel when I'm reading. One other gripe I have is that I don't know where in the DxD timeline this takes place when you compare it to the original. Besides those two gripes I genuinely enjoy this fanfic and I hope Revengelord continues to write both of his fanfics until completion.
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Great Looking for a long time, this kind of translation, plus President Zona is the best. There are 100 episodes. Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice
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So aside from stability of update. I give five stars to everything else. Still, I will officially give 5 stars because I want to support him and offset some of the stupid reviews. This author here is a good friend of mine and I like to think that I participated a little in creating this story. Firstly for all those who complain about the mc being a servant. They are childish stupid and many other kinds of insult I won't use. What's bad about having a mc who WAS a servant? He didn't even stay one for more than 5 chapters. The author simply used it as a way to make a connection between the mc and the sitri house as such a direct connection with the main plot of the story. Stupid reviews who only review after reading less than 5 chapters. Secondly, the author isn't one who only thinks with his dick. Of course, there will be a harem. But it won't be one full of tens of girls. Each girl will have a reason to fall for the mc and they won't be numerous. Five to six I think. Finally, the author didn't simply watch the anime he also read the light novel who have more than 25 volumes + side stories + a prequel + a sequel. It's voluminous. Let's hope the author will write a great story.
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Very good book, I like the Ortus system, writing quality Is top notch, MC isnt a beta but also dosent think with his dick. .........................................
Yaaaaaaaa iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis goooooooood nooooooooveeeeeeeel faaaaaaanfiiiiiiiiiiiic hs dxd i hope always update to end πππππππππππ
I thank the lord author is back updating the story. The story is just great and I love it. Hate Rias because sheβs just so stubborn and ignorant. Iβm glad the FL is someone else. Anyways, overall is great and I look forward to more is all I can say.
THE MORE I READ OF THIS STORY THE MORE I LIKE IT πππππππππππππππ€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©πππππππππππππππππβββββ
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice
if you stay consistent with the novel update sooner or later it will continue to rise in rank, keep up the spirit, friends, there are still many people waiting for the novel update faster, thank you
Goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd goodddddddddddddddddddddd
I enjoyed your other fanfic and this one as well. I'll give you a five. Look forward to more if you works Jan-ne.
Nice work well done keep it this way cooΔΊllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllΔΊlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
The author name make me afraid of giving a bad review so here you go......... That's aside, I like this novel more than the author other work, Sona as the main heroine is nice, personally I don't mine him being servant as long as he has the gut to stand up for himself instead of getting push around like some of those irritating protagonist out there( the MC is only servant for the first few chapters though). Hopefully MC don't end up in a relationship with Rias, not that I really hate her but yeah, hope they stay just as friend or something.
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!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!!Gurararara~~~~~~~!
Reveal Spoiler This **** is crazy! Its completely next level. I really loved the spongebob arc. Thanos got absolutely annihilated by spongebob. MC was so pathetic when fighting Thanos yet spongebob completely desteoyed him. Although its kinda disappointing that the MC loves that trap.
This is good. Keep it up......more chapter......;m;mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm;mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
GurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurararararararaGurarararararara
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I like that the main heroine is Sona ,I was getting tired of Rias being the bitchy heroine. It would be great if he creates a public organization like a guild. It would be great if he doesn't control the chaos brigade so there will be some plots left for the "Oppai Dragon" so reconsider my review. I also like his trials. WILL RATE FIVE πSTARS TO SUPPORT AUTHOR , RATE HIM FIVE STARS OR VOTE HIM TO KEEP THIS GOING, I DON'T WANT THIS NOVEL TO BE DROPPEDπ₯πππππ₯π₯ [THIS IS A MASTERPIECE]. ππ+π=πͺ
.....,............................,................,.,.,.,.,.,.....,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., , ,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,. ,.., ,.,,..,.,., ,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,., , ,., , , , ,., ..,.,.,., ,., , .,.,.,.,., , , ,-,-,-
Reveal Spoiler I enjoy how different it is from other DxD fanfics and how the main difference is that Trials has Sona as the main heroine in this harem fanfic instead of the usual Rias making it refreshing. I like the character designs but I kinda wish there was a description of the main character as I try to imagine the scene and the characters of the fanfic and novel when I'm reading. One other gripe I have is that I don't know where in the DxD timeline this takes place when you compare it to the original. Besides those two gripes I genuinely enjoy this fanfic and I hope Revengelord continues to write both of his fanfics until completion.
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Great Looking for a long time, this kind of translation, plus President Zona is the best. There are 100 episodes. Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice
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So aside from stability of update. I give five stars to everything else. Still, I will officially give 5 stars because I want to support him and offset some of the stupid reviews. This author here is a good friend of mine and I like to think that I participated a little in creating this story. Firstly for all those who complain about the mc being a servant. They are childish stupid and many other kinds of insult I won't use. What's bad about having a mc who WAS a servant? He didn't even stay one for more than 5 chapters. The author simply used it as a way to make a connection between the mc and the sitri house as such a direct connection with the main plot of the story. Stupid reviews who only review after reading less than 5 chapters. Secondly, the author isn't one who only thinks with his dick. Of course, there will be a harem. But it won't be one full of tens of girls. Each girl will have a reason to fall for the mc and they won't be numerous. Five to six I think. Finally, the author didn't simply watch the anime he also read the light novel who have more than 25 volumes + side stories + a prequel + a sequel. It's voluminous. Let's hope the author will write a great story.
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